Redaction 2

E aqui está mais uma mini redação que fiz lá no curso de inglês. Trata-se de uma carta descrevendo o cotidiano da minha melhor amiga. Desta vez não tirei nota máxima, mas cheguei perto!

 Camilla is twenty years old and a great friend. Everybody likes her. She is a very good student. She always gets good marks at college, specialley in rhythm and dance. In the morning, she gets up at 5 o' clock, has breakfast at about 6 a.m and goes to work. Every day she has lunch at 1 p.m. On Monday and Wenesday afternoon she goes to English class. on Friday afternoon she dances and sings at project Meninos do Morumbi. in the evening she goes to college and goes to her house at 10.45 p.m. She rarely has dinner. She goes to bed at about 12 p.m.